P020-N008 Moderate
In the four regression panels of Figure 4, bias is measured from a dotted line at 1.0 percentage point and not from the stated true effect of 0.7; measured from 0.7, the biases of the fixed-effects and random-effects regressions are about 1.2 and 2.3 points instead of 0.9 and 2.0, and the figure does not establish downward bias of the difference-in-means.
Figure 4, p. 67 (PDF p. 29), the four regression panels; Section 6.5, p. 66 (PDF p. 28), first two paragraphs; Section 6.2, p. 61 (PDF p. 23), last sentence
As printed
Section 6.2, p. 61, last sentence: “Marginalizing over the imputation process, the ATE is in expectation , or 0.7 percentage points.”
Section 6.5, p. 66, first paragraph: “Figure 4 displays results under treatment effect heterogeneity. Solid vertical lines indicate the mean of the sampling distributions. Dotted vertical lines indicate the true treatment effect (0.7 percentage points).”
Section 6.5, p. 66, second paragraph: “Interestingly, the regression without covariates (difference-in-means) is only slightly biased downward.”
Figure 4, p. 67, labels of the four regression panels, in percentage points. In each of these panels the dotted line is drawn near 1.0 on the horizontal axis.
| Panel | Bias | SD | RMSE |
|---|---|---|---|
| Reg. (Diff-in-means) | |||
| Reg. w/FE | |||
| Reg. w/FE, cov. | |||
| Reg. w/FE, cov, RE |
The problem
Section 6.2 states that the true effect in the scenario with heterogeneous effects is 0.7 percentage points, and Section 6.5 says that the dotted lines of Figure 4 mark it. In the published figure, the dotted lines stand at 1.00 on the axis in the four regression panels, and each printed bias equals the position of the solid line minus the position of the dotted line, to the printed decimal. The three design-based panels show no separate dotted line. The text and the figure cannot both be right, and rounding does not reconcile them: a value printed as 0.007 lies between 0.65 and 0.75 percentage points, and every dotted line lies between 0.99 and 1.01. If the true effect is 0.7, as the text states twice, then the biases of the four regressions are about 0.3 points higher than printed: about for the difference-in-means, and for the two fixed-effects regressions, and for the random-effects regression. The RMSE labels of the fixed-effects and random-effects panels (, and ) are then too small. From the published means and standard deviations, I obtain about , and a value between and . The sentence that the difference-in-means is “only slightly biased downward” rests on the printed . Measured from 0.7, the plotted mean of that estimator is higher by about 0.05, with a Monte Carlo standard error of about 0.03, so the figure does not establish downward bias.
The label “Bias = 0.0” of the Horvitz–Thompson panel also needs to be recomputed. The mean drawn in that panel is 0.82, which exceeds every target between 0.65 and 0.75 by more than 0.05. If the target is exactly 0.7, the same holds for the Des Raj panel with , whose mean is 0.77. These are disagreements between labels and plotted means in a simulation of 5,000 draws, and they do not imply that either design-based estimator is biased. The cause of the mismatch is not established, since the original simulation code and draws are not available.
Evidence a recalculation from the source
The evidence is a recalculation from the published PDF, in which Figure 4 is stored as vector artwork. The coordinates of the axis ticks, the solid lines and the dotted lines were read from the page and converted to the scale of the axis in exact rational arithmetic. The remaining ticks fit this calibration to within 0.0015 points, and the incompatibility with the stated effect persists with a tolerance of 0.005. A second, independent reading of the coordinates agrees with the first to within 0.002 points.
| Panel | Solid | Dotted | Printed bias | Solid minus 0.7 | Printed RMSE | RMSE at 0.7 |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Reg. (Diff-in-means) | – | |||||
| Reg. w/FE | – | |||||
| Reg. w/FE, cov. | – | |||||
| Reg. w/FE, cov, RE | – |
The solid line minus the dotted line is , , and in the four panels, and these values round to the printed biases. Suppose that a printed bias is rounded to one decimal and that the solid line is at . Then a target compatible with the label lies in . For the four panels these intervals are , , and , and each of them lies above . For the RMSE, I use the identity
applied to the empirical distribution of the 5,000 estimates, with , the plotted mean and a standard deviation within of the printed one. If the standard deviation uses divisor 4,999, its square is multiplied by to give the empirical variance. The last column of the table shows the resulting approximate range. The printed of the difference-in-means panel lies in its range, and the printed , and lie outside theirs. The last column gives guides rather than exact replacement labels: the plotted positions and the printed standard deviations are rounded, and the original draws are not available.
What survives
The inconsistency concerns the reporting of Figure 4 and the downward-bias sentence of Section 6.5. With the published means and standard deviations and a target near 0.7, the biases of the fixed-effects and random-effects regressions remain positive, the random-effects regression still has the smallest standard deviation, and the Horvitz–Thompson estimator remains imprecise. The grouping by RMSE is unchanged: the smallest values belong to the Des Raj estimators, and then come the fixed-effects regressions, the difference-in-means, the random-effects regression and the Horvitz–Thompson estimator. On these numbers, the statement that the Des Raj estimators are the most precise in terms of RMSE stands. The arguments on bias and consistency in Section 3 and the estimators and unbiasedness results of Sections 4 and 5 do not use Figure 4. Figures 2 and 3 come from the separate calculation under the sharp null. Figure 5 concerns standard errors and does not depend on the placement of Figure 4’s reference lines. What changes is the size of the regression biases, the RMSE labels of three panels, and the statement that the difference-in-means shows a downward bias in this example; the empirical bias labels of the design-based panels also require checking. The theoretical result that the difference-in-means can be biased is not affected.
Corrected
In Figure 4, the dotted lines should be drawn at the common, unrounded true effect of the scenario, and all empirical bias and RMSE labels should be computed from it. If that effect is 0.7 percentage points, as stated on pp. 61 and 66, then the published means and standard deviations give the following approximate labels.
| Panel | Bias | SD | RMSE |
|---|---|---|---|
| Reg. (Diff-in-means) | |||
| Reg. w/FE | |||
| Reg. w/FE, cov. | |||
| Reg. w/FE, cov, RE |
Section 6.5, second paragraph: “Interestingly, the regression without covariates (difference-in-means) has a mean close to the true effect.”
Exact labels require the unrounded true effect and the original draws. Changing the text to 1.0 has not been checked against the imputation model, and it would leave the labels “Bias = 0.0” of the three design-based panels in conflict with their plotted means of 0.82, 0.77 and 0.75.















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